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Living in an age when everything around us is becoming unstable and changeable,many people are lost in this rapidly changing society and couldn't situated themselves,the tiny creature,in this humorous world.Under this circumstance, philosophers begin to think over it and come up with the saying that 'The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it' The reasons why I insist on the above viewpoint mainly lie in the following two aspects.To begin with,life,in my opinion,refers to the tree which can be continued by its seeds and its fundamental nutrition can be inherited although ending in death.So, to apply ourselves to something meaningful can not only provide our offspring with much more nutritions but also enlarge our limited life to be recognised by our followings.In addition,making a good use of our life time can also help satisfy ourselves. To sum up,it is not wise to spend our life on trivial and eternal life consists in spending time for something that will outlast our life.
