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It is not clever that you have a thought as long as you see or hear one thing. In other word, we should not cultivite other's behavor,beacuse if you do not know whole things ,you may make wrong decision or hurt others. First of all, the groundless conclusion will break off a frendship. for examle ,Lily and jack are friend, but someday lily saw jack fight with a man, and then she heard that man said loudly to jack that you stolen my bag. Lily at once think jack is not good person .Lily is no longer connect jack,they lost their friendship.In fact ,that man is jack's brother, they play a joke. Secondly, the groundless conclusion will let you become a unpopular person. YOU always tell groudless things to other people ,when the true appears ,you will lose your parents ,frends or boyfriend 's trust. Last, in my opinion, sometimes it will bring you a big breaking. when a policeman asked you a counter, you can not answer hastily,because your answer will decide other's fate. At once getting the conclusion is not intelligence.
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