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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
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文章层次较为清晰;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;文中词汇表达较为丰富准确,但存在单词拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Thinking more In our daily life,we often saw or heared a lot of things.But it is correct that we saw or heared? That's a big question.I firmly deem that some problems were drew a conclusion through what we saw or heared is not wise.My reasons are as follows. To begin with,many people was confused by superficial goods.For example,when we look at two person fight with each other,which conslusion that they are redicilous and we are not to talk with them,but the fact that they drunk and made a jok each other.Next,distinguished a person by one thing that he mistaken in one thing.Last but not least,everyone has different act and has different things he did,so we don't know what the problems and what the key. so hearing or seeing somehings draw a conclusion is unwise. That's unfair for other people and cause some obstacles when we deal with problems and make friends.

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