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In the era of internet-orinented, People,especially adolescents are easy to draw a conclusion in accordance with what they see or hear. a lot of information from all walks of life, including good news or bad, spurs our eyes. There is no doubt that internet is the most popular way for us to attain information instead of through traditional ways such as TV,newspaper and so forth.Most of the time, we are unable to judge what is right or not,which leads up to unwise decisions were made.
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