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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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There is a saying goes"if you do not believe him,do not use the person".In other words,if you intend to use somebody to do something for you,you are obliged to trust in him.Work is based on mutual trust.Only through this way,can each one cooperate each other.Why is important for us to maintaining the trust?The following is my opinion. For one thing,trust is the foundation of the mutual interaction.Obviously,it is the premise to cooperation friendly.No trust,no joint work.Therefore,it is very significant for us to maintain the trust.Of course,trust is not equivalent to defer.For another thing,there is an old saying goes"unity is strength".That is to say,trust is fundamental to generate this power.Thus,trust plays a role on our lives and work.What is more,trust can promote things moving in the right direction development. To conclude,trust will make our life more enjoyable,that is to say,trust can add color to the dull routine of everyday life.For the sense,we require to maintain trust.

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