题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
There is a saying goes"if you do not believe him,do not use the person".In other words,if you intend to use somebody to do something for you,you are obliged to trust in him.Work is based on mutual trust.Only through this way,can each one cooperate each other.Why is important for us to maintaining the trust?The following is my opinion. For one thing,trust is the foundation of the mutual interaction.Obviously,it is the premise of cooperation friendly.No trust,no joint work.Therefore,it is very significant for us to maintain the trust.Of course,trust is not equivalent to defer.For another thing,there is an old saying goes"unity is strength".That is to say,trust is fundamental to generate this power.Thus,trust plays a role on our lives and work.What is more,trust can promote things moving in the right direction development. To conclude,trust will make our life more enjoyable,that is to say,trust can add color to the dull routine of everyday life.For the sense,we require to maintain trust.