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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10411[网页划词已开启]
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;上下文衔接手法不熟练,没有能够有效的使用衔接词;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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Todays, with the development of scoial, people will have more and more choices in one thing. As a saying goes:"Every coin has two sides". Every choice has both sides, so don't put all your eggs in one backet is the best way. In my opinion, i believe that put your eggs in different backets has a lot advantages than disadvantages. To begin with, when your one choice fail or has some difficults, you still has plan B. It will help you to relax and more easy to walk out the difficults. Secondly, if your plan A has some accidents and at that time you must deal with the item, you can use the plan B. In business, most of mangers prepare A,B,C plans to finish a item. However, it also has some disadvantages. Because a person has limitation of energy and ability, he can't do better in every aspects or plans. To sum up, don't put all your eggs in one backet is the best way to do.

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