2012年7月7日雅思大作文真题:广告对消费者的影响

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Nowadays,incresasing number of people are deeply influenced by advertisements when they choose what they want to buy.However,how should we treat as the problem that advertising encourage people to buy in quantity rather than promoting its quality? In my opinion,I trend more to the promoting of quality.For me,when I want to buy some goods,and the first brand of this product emerge in my mind usualy coming from the advertising.Of course,if this product dose not have good quality,and you usualy do not rise up it.On the other hand,making an advertising input very much,if you qulity is poor,it is no doulbt that you will loss your position in the market.Conversly,good quality combing with a positive advertising can advance the quantity of the products. So,I think advertising can more influence people to buy the products with good quality.