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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8973
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分79.5分
评语:

文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

For years, judging people with their appearance is a common occurrences in our lives.About this issue,the attitudes vary from person to person. Some people tend to agree to judge people with their appearance.What in their mind is that good looks can give a good impression on them.They think ugly people spot their sight and make them vomit.Is that true?The answer is absolutely negative.Their prejudice makes them generate the feeling of disgust,However,they owe their reactions to the ugly.While others suspect that we cannot comment a person good or bad,intelligent or stupid only by superficial character.In consequence of that appearance is natural and we have no right choose it.Appearance can't suggest anything.The real thing does't write on the face.Speaking for myself,I can't agree more with the latter.Apperance is superficial.Only having a good heart can make you real beauty. To conclude,only after getting along with a person,we can know what kind of person he or she is.Don't judge others from appearance,which is unwise.

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