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my good friend is very funny. He always talk loundly with laught. he is good with people.He like study,aslo study hard.He able to learn math and chinese,Teachers like him very much.He is very sporting,he always play football on the weekend.His swiming also good.Many classmate like him,everyone like play with him, He is my best friend Neil.