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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12880
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇,不过拼写错误比较多;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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From the cartoon given above,we can obsever that the couple contracting their child though internet,and the couple is very care about son's live. Along with the advance of the society more and more individual who use networking website contracting with orthers.Many people can contract old friends as well as make new friends.But we don't conmmunicate face to face,what's more,some teengers addited the networking website. In a word,soial networking website is oppturnet and change as for our monder life,we best benifent to it.

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