托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第51篇:住在乡下是否比城市好

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There is a theme that living in a rural area is better than living around a lot of people or not .I think living in a rural area is better . You must want to ask me why I think that .First I like country .There are many trees and animals .Trees make air to fresh .Environment is very good .Then, living in rural area is good for city ,right ?Because,more and more people is living in urban area ,house in urban area is more expensive but in rural area house is cheap and widely .third,country is quiet .it's not like city too noisy. When you finish your work ,you want a surround quietly,don't you ? Quietly environment make you more relax .finally ,living in rural area can make you cost less spend,because in country price of many things is more cheap than in urban .So you can save money to travel and to do many things. Now ,do you want to live in rural area ? Whatever, I want to live in country .