小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Hellow every body.I'm Jack.I have a good friend.His name is tony. He is nine old.He has black hair and big eyes.He live in ShangHai.He study in same school with me.He is a very fun person.He like play basketball,computer games,football and swimming. Usually We play together. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much. I am proud for he.