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The Way to Meaningful Life From the present society, we can see that the life of us is filled with boredom. For example, students are always busy with their homework and examinations. They just learn about the knowledge from the books with little time to know the outside world; the working adults are always concentrate on their work and salaries. Even a two-day holiday will make them happy. I believe the saying that "the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it". Our life should not be such peaceful and unexciting since we are young and energetic enough to confront the unexpected. First, we should set a goal for us whatever it is in the long run or short. A right goal can help us achieve the success faster by avoiding the wrong way. Secondly, we should have a good knowledge of the whole world. Thus, we won't be so nervous and be at a loss when we get a job. Finally, once the goal is set, we should realize it immediately. Only after trying the thoughts will we know the result and the mistakes. Above all, our life is sure to be meaningful after doing the former things. And also the life is magnificent and unforgettable.
