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It is universally acknowledged that the truth often obscured under the surface.As a famous proverb goes,it is unwise to come up with conclusions directly merely by seeing or listening.It means that before making a decision we need to have adequate consideration. Not all the information we see is true,and we ought to focus on whether the information is true or not,which in order to advoid drawing a wrong decision.For instance,the Internet has provided a massive amounts of information to us,some of which is rumors created by some people who have illegal goals.If an overwhelming majority of human beings believe these rumors just by seeing or listening,it will reduce a serious result.People will be threatened by rumors as well as lose confidence about the future .As time gose,the society becomes mess,which even influence the stability of the country. From where I stand,it is highly unfeasible to come up with conclusions just by seeing or listening.For the sake of our life,we come to conclusions after thinking twice.
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