作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
We all know the importance of the interpersonal communication.Obviously,interpersonal communication plays a role in our lives.For example,when we go shopping,we are obliged to talk with salesperson.Therefore,it is very useful for us.Here are some of my views about the significance of interpersonal communication. More and more people take the interpersonal communication seriously.That is to say,it plays a very important role on our life.Everywhere life cannot do without interpersonal communication.As stated earlier,when we go shopping,we must communicate with people.For instance,when we conduct a class,teacher and students communicate each other.We come to some place where we don't know,we require help from somebody.Consequently,it is essential for us to communicate.However,as is known to all,technique is developing rapidly.Internet accounts for our life,it has produced important impact about interpersonal communication in our lives at the same time.Meanwhile,interpersonal communication on the Internet can bring about negative impacts on our live.It causes lack of communication. Hence,we should focus on interpersonal communication in the information society.In other words,we should give it comprehensive attention.Interpersonal communication will make our life more enjoyable,that is to say,it can add color to the dull routine of everyday life.
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