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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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文中能使用多样的词汇表达,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;若注意部分错误,文章会更漂亮。

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Do not draw conclusions at once For lots of people,they easy to draw a conclusion by one's appearance or other comments.It is unwise to judge a person who is really kind or bad.If we draw a conclusion without any evidences,we will be treated by our eye or ears. With the social and technological development,lots of chatting tools are occured,people likes to use internet tools to chat with others,there are some people who takes advanced in chatting to win trust of the pure students,and they lack of social experience,at this time,they were treated easily.Therefore,we should not trust some people that we never learn and meet. Just as saying goes,those who involved closely can not see clearly as those ousides. As far as i am concerned,we should promote our attentions to prevent treated from bad persons.We also can not trust a person what she said.Sometimes,we are also treated by our eyes.So long as draw a conclusion takes all aspects into consideration,we can avoid draw a inadequate or one-side conclusions.

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