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回复：Smith回复自己将于近日回国处理公司要事，不能前往，表示歉意。
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June 4th, 2010 Dear Wang Li, Thanks for inviting me to join the birthday party of your lovely son. I had seen this cute baby before, I like him vrey much. But it is pity for me to tell you that I can not join it. In these days, I'm going to retrun home from abroad to deal with some important business. I am so sorry for that and I hope I can come someday. Sincerely, John Smith
