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everybody all have own friends. me too. my best friend named xiaoming. she is a samrt girl .and she have a pair of blue eyes . besides . she also is kind-hearted very much. for example . she is quiet good at English .therefore .she always help those students poor basic. not only I like her. but also our classmates like her