小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend.She is Jenny. She is a beautiful girl.She has a long hair,two big eyes and a small mouth.She usually wears a dress and a pair of blue shoes. Jenny is a clever girl,too.She is good at English.She likes dancing and singing.She likes reading,too.This is my good friend.I like her very much.What about you?