2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

We can see from the picture there is a man swipe a credit card on POS machine.And the machine print a lot of bills.Obviously,using credit cards is widespread especially on the chinese mainland. Now there have a question whether we should use credit cards.On the one hand,it is a convenient way to consumer.The public do not need not carry large amounts of cash and not worried about their money be stole.In addition,china has seen fast economic development over the past decades.The use of credit cards has also made a massive contribution to this end.On the other hand,while a group of people have no ability to pay line of credit,they still use the cards.This consumption pattern means more than debt,it actually brings the burden in the future. With rapid social and economic development,a growing share of way of payment go into millions of households.Choosing carefully a suitable way is a mast.Only in this way can the prospect of life be brighter.