2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Tom,Do you have time this Saterday? I would go home,so i want to invite you to visit my hometown .My hometown is a famous palace in ancient. It is a historical city. there are many of significant and beautiful palaces.Long long ago ,in the history of our country is called Han Dynasties .My hometown was its capital during that time .