2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

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My hometoen is in Chaoshan which is a long history city.There are so many interestiingplace we can have fun.First,I would take him to see some chaacteristic building.Jizhou bridge is famous in Chaoshan.Everyone should visit it if they has been in Chaoshan.In second day,Iwill take him to visit natural sights.We are going to the fenghuang mountain,which we could enjoy its fresh air and relief. The last place I would like to take him to is Taipping street.Ireally like this place.Because of there are many diliscous food which were just find in Chaoshan.I want him to tasty the beef ball. Bases on the above-mentioned,which I would like to take him where.