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作者词汇基础不错，还请增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Dear Pacival, I am thrilled to know that you are going to visit my hometown and I can't wait to see you again.I miss everything that happened when I was in your city,and your parents and you were so kind to me that I will try my best this time to make your stay be an enjoyable and memorable one。 My home town,Changsha,is the capital of Hunan province and best known as the top city for its well developed-entertainment industry and tourism.There are numerous places and attractions worth recommending,and YueluMountain is the first one that I'd like to introduce to you.Firstly,in the foot of Yuelu Mountain is the prominent YueluAcademy.It has an exceedingly long history and its architecture is characteristic in the Song Dynasty.Then,after a half hour,we will reach the Forest.There are various rare birds there,and they can sing,perform,and interact with us.After about an hour,we will arrive at the peak,Baiyun Summit.The scenery there is spectacular and we can have a wonderful panorama of the whole city。 I bet you must be very excited about all these activities,and the Yuelu Mountain is waiting for us to explore.All you need to do is pack up and go,and I assure you that this trip will be a great fun。 Should you have any question and suggestion,please let me know。 I am looking forward to your arrival。 Yours sincerely. Romeo
