2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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As we all know,with the development of science and technology,many people are like shopping online.there are some advantage and disadvantage obout online shopping. On the one hand,it is beneficial for someone who is busy in work,because it can save time,and it is convenient for someone who disabled.What's more,it is cheaper than in the entity shop. But on the other hand,we can't see the quality of the goods.Somethings not good as the seller talk.Sometimes we will buy somethings that we unwanted or unsuitable.So we probably wast money on somethings. As far as I am concerned,I think we should careless online shopping.