2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

As we all know,with the development of science and technology,many people are like shopping online.There are some advantages and disadvantages about online shopping. On the one hand,it is beneficial for somepeople who is busy in work,because it can save time,and it is convenient for somepeople who disabled.What's more,it is cheaper than in the shop. But on the other hand,we can't see the quality of the goods.Something not good as the seller talk.Sometimes we will buy somethings that we unwanted or unsuitable.So we probably waste money on something. As far as I am concerned, we should care for online shopping.