2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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As we all know,with the development of science and technology,many people are like shopping online.There are some advantages and disadvantages about online shopping. On the one hand,it is beneficial for some people who are busy at work,because it can save time,and it is convenient for some people who disabled.What's more,it is much cheaper than in the shop. But on the other hand,we can't see the quality of the goods.Something not good as the seller talk.Sometimes we will buy some goods that we unwanted or unsuitable.So we probably waste money on something. As far as I am concerned, we should care for online shopping.