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若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者平时练习中应扩充词汇量，注意几处拼写错误；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
The information explosion With the social and technology development,there are a variety of network communication tools have occurred.While we surfing in the internet,a lot of advertisiments and information will distract my attention. Just as the saying goes,a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. Information exploision has a great influence on our life.To begin with,lots of information in the internet will interupt our oringinal thinking and we cannot finish task on time.Morever,it will distract our attention and absorb our eyes to see other advertisements so that we forget information what we need.In addition,a wealth of information made some students always play computergames and cannot focus on their study. As fa as i am concerned,i will take some notes on the parper which information that i want to search.When i scan the website,i will close some advertisements to keep my focus.
