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文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高，学术词汇的积累上也要再接再厉；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
The information explosion With the social and technology development,there are a variety of network communication tools have occurred.While we surfing in the internet,a lot of advertisements and information will distract my attention. Just as the saying goes,a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. Information exploison has a great influence on our life.To begin with,lots of information in the internet will interrupt our oringinal thinking and we cannot finish task on time.Morever,it will distract our attention and absorb our eyes to see other advertisements so that we forget information what we need.In addition,a wealth of information made some students always play computer games and cannot focus on their study. As fa as i am concerned,I will take some notes on the paper which information that i want to search.When i scan the website,i will close some advertisements to keep my focus.
