2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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How mobile phones inflence our life With the development of the Internet, people can use mobile phone anywhere. Even to the extent that mobile phone becomes one thing that we can't away from. Mobile phone also becomes double-edged sword. On the one hand, mobile phone take lots of conveniences. First of all, if we intend to contact one person, what we need to do is to take out our cell phone dial numbers and then we can reach them in minute is so convenient. What's more, the distance between people becomes less and less. And the most important is that when some one has a heart attack or a traffic accident, a call to the police can quickly bring him the help he wants. On the other hand, mobile phone always has a lot of disadvantages. More and more people became people who they can't live without mobile phone. They play the mobile phone anywhere, anytime, having a meeting or having a class or at a concert etc, and the ring of the cell phone may interrupt others. And the most serious is the electric wave radiation which is thought to be harmful to users brave. In conclusion, the mobile phone act upon our life greatly.