2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

There is a famous saying"genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine cent perspiration".Accordingly,genius is also ordinary people,he just possesses the necessary conditions of success.Therefore,let us talk about the way to success.The following is my view. To begin with,the first element to success is diligence.Actually,we all know the truth that diligence can contribute to success.Such like Leonardo Da Vinci,who is absorbed in sketch,repeated practice.Through the long-term artistic practice hard,finally created a lot of monumental paintings.Moreover,labor is the essential condition to success.There is an old saying goes"cease to struggle and you cease to live".In other words,wherever lives,wherever labor.In condition to that,the one of the way to success is an attitude.It is the significant attitude to have a correct attitude.We are obliged to possess positive attitude and believe firmly we will success.Last but not least,all successful people have the same point that is dream.There is a saying"who aims at excellence will be above mediocrity;who aims at mediocrity will be far short of it."It indicates that we should set ambitious goals in order to be successful.Consequently,dream is very vital to achieve successful goals. Hence,one should focus on above views to gain achievement.There is a vital point that we should pay attention to make self-improvement.When we do all things,we are closed to success.