2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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What is the most interesting place in my hometown? In my sight,my hometown,Shaoxing,is a cultural city which more famous people borned and grew.But as for me , which the most attracted me is a place that the famous one once lived----LuXun. If my foreign friend comes to my hometown,i will take her here.Firstly,one thing i need to do that told her the story of LuXun,and enjoy the place Luxun lived and learned.More importantly,there are more special food of my homntown,the wine,tofu,vegetable and so on.The delious food is must introduced to her and made her having.Finally,the most important thing is taking photo together to record the buautiful landscape and enjoy time. I belive my foreign friend will fall in love with my hometown,this beautifulcity.