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Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought our attention.One of which is that the road leads to happiness.Happiness is an enduring topic.All of the people want to lead a happy life.However,who knows what the so-called happy life is.Following are the answers. Some people take the view that happiness is the absence of problems.What in their mind is that there are no obstacles,frustration and failures.That's to say,things detaining them succeed should vanish from their life,which is happiness in their eyes.While others have the different opinion.They believe that"Happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them".Put it another way,happiness isn't equal to having no barriers in live,but the capability to do with barriers well.Speaking for myself,I have the same opinion with the latter.If there were no obstacles,our life would be monotonous,which is I have in mind. To conclusion,hardship can add color to our mundane life than ruin it.So,don't complain the problems,which are the sources of happiness.
