2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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At present our life floood phone every where,It is terrible that people using phone whatever,their eyes do not leave to see screen.As we konw it is dangerous walking on rode do not watch strcuture cause accident.But people do not realize when the accident was occured because they is rusing into play phone.In the past people used phone in order to call and send massage,because the phone is simple,but now it is fasion to play phone,not only adult oldler play phone but also childuren,The time is process the more people need to live more color than past,So the phone is adapt to time to change continue.The phone is more good and more perfect,people are depend on playing phone software,so our life is a world flood electrict product such as phone iapd that we ingore to commuication with people and put up head to look at rode.peole possess phone but life is along.