2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(50):过度溺爱

要求：

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Helicopter parents （过度溺爱孩子的父母）pay close attention to everything, and overmanage their child's life. Some make sure their child succeeds in every way. Others hurry to prevent harm, instead of letting their children learn from their mistakes.
Like a helicopter that hovers, parents by the same name are always within reach, even when their children demand a bit more breathing room. They think they're helping their children, but experts believe they could be causing more harm than good.
 Are you in constant contact with your child? Cell phones have led to frequent communication between parents and children. If you call your child every morning to make sure he's getting to class on time, take a step back.
Do you try and make all your child's academic decisions for him? If you are choosing their courses and career path, you're not letting them decide how to live their own lives. Giving advice is OK, but give them some space to make their own decisions.
Do you get anxious if your child doesn't succeed? Helicopter parents base their own self-worth on their child's success, and that can create problems for everyone. If your child fails a project or has relationship troubles in college, don't take it personally. You've done the best you can, and now the rest is up to them.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点；
2. 然后以约120个词就“Helicopter Parents”这一主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：
a) 以自己的学习生活为例，简述在日常学习生活中你父母对你的溺爱；
b)你对父母做法的看法及理由；
c)你给父母提出合理化建议，让你父母为你的成长少担心，多放心。
[写作要求]
a）可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
b) 标题自定。

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