2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

With the development of science and techonology,we are in an age of science now.The cell phone is used by everyone in everywhere.Even when people are crossing the street. Some people hold the view that cell phone processes a quantity of information,and they also can make friends though the small box.It brings covenient to everyone.Especially in the teenager. But I don't support that view.As far as I am concered,I think using the telephone is bad for people.Especially the students.They may be so enthralment to the cell phone that don't concentrate on the study.Meanwhile large reading by the box will be harm to your eyes.What's the most important is that the internet is the source of all information.So we can't promise we can get some poor infomation. So I think we should use the telephone correctlly.In proper time correct pot.