2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the develop of society , more and more people like online shopping . Online shopping have became afashion trend . Online shopping make people can shopping when they stay home . Besides , we can get cheap goods . Online shopping help people save time , people can do something what they want . But online shopping is not all good . It takes people some trouble , too . For example , people are not sure that this goods are good . It can reduce the time that people talk with others . In my opinion , people should go out shopping so that they can meet their friends . Certainly , I don't mind online shopping . But you should carefully change your goods .