2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章层次较为清晰；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些，还要加强单词拼写的检查。

every one want to be successful,but success is not easy.s o how can we be successful?in my oppinion,industrial and insistant are the cricial factors which really affact you succee or fail. there are thousands of things that can change your result of success,for inatance, the enviroment of economy,the friends you make ,and the opportunity you get, and these factors are uncontrolable and unpredictable ,but,there is at least one thing which is under your control, your industrial and insistant. i believe , everyone can be successful with their hardwork and a heart of never give up.be passionate,stick up to your goal, you can success.