2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；全文结构较为严谨；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

Every one want to be successful,but success is not easy. So how can we succeed?In my opinion,industrious and insistence are the crucial factors which really affect you succeed or fail. There are thousands of things that can change your result of success,for instance, the environment of economy,the friends you make,and the opportunity you get,and these factors are uncontrollable and unpredictable,but,there is at least one thing which is under your control,your industrious and insistence. I believe,everyone can be successful with their hardwork and a heart of never give up.be passionate,stick up to your goal, you can succeed.