作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
I have a good friend whose name is Linda.She is a girl with black long hair. We often play together after class. She seems taller than another same-aged girls. Although her study is not very well , she keeps studying harder and harder. I like to play with her not because she is beautiful but also she is very kind girl. When we were in Grade Four, I felt not well one day, she sent me to hospital and telephoned my parents. We will be good friend forever.