作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
Along with the development of society,more and more informations come into our lives.It makes our life convenient.We only need sitting front the computer,clinking our mouth,and we can get the information we want.For of these, informations play a significant role in our lives.Nevertheless,it has both positives and negatives. For one thing,it saves extra time for us,and it is deliciously abundant,so if we have enough time,we can look through all the relevant informations until we find out what we need.For another,the negative aspects are also apparent.When we search for some informations on the Internet,many other informations appear.Those irrelevant informations will shift our attention,so that we forget what sort of information we need.Worst of all,some informations often misguide us.It gives wrong informations and lead us to the wrong road. In conclusion, information itself is neither good nor bad.It is up to ourselves to find its advantages,rather than make use of its disadvantages.
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