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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):信息爆炸

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:09浏览次数:5740
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay about the impact of the information explosion by referring to the saying "A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention. You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分87.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Along with the development of society,more and more informations come into our lives.It makes our life convenient.We only need sitting front the computer,clinking our mouth,and we can get the information we want.For of these, informations play a significant role in our lives.Nevertheless,it has both positives and negatives. For one thing,it saves extra time for us,and it is deliciously abundant,so if we have enough time,we can look through all the relevant informations until we find out what we need.For another,the negative aspects are also apparent.When we search for some informations on the Internet,many other informations appear.Those irrelevant informations will shift our attention,so that we forget what sort of information we need.Worst of all,some informations often misguide us.It gives wrong informations and lead us to the wrong road. In conclusion, information itself is neither good nor bad.It is up to ourselves to find its advantages,rather than make use of its disadvantages.

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