2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

with the development of the technologe and science ,computer becomes extremly important in our work and life,more and more people can not live without computer,they are gradually thinking like computer.As to this problem,what should we do? In morden society,the computers are used by people widely,such as in hospital,in schools and the company.the medical are development rapidly,one of the vital reason is the advanced computer,without the computer,the hospital is hardly running.Beside,the more works of the students have to complent in the computer , sometimes they look for the answer directly in the Internet and past on the paper in the comuter without thinking.How terrible!Nowdays,the bussiness are very flourish and the employee frequently face to the computer to do the bussiness,it's timely and efficient.How should we do if the computer doesn't be invitered? For my perspective,the computer is nessessary to the morden society,but we can't depend on it to do all things in our lifetime.If we live and thinking without computer,maybe we 'll be controll by the computer one day.