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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文中学术词汇使用贫乏,同时拼写错误稍多;有效的运用了一些复杂句;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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On maintaining trust As the proverb goes: if we all keep on maintaining trust, our lives would be of great harmoney and beauty. However, living in the high-pressure modern society makes people become losing trust and indifferent. In my opinion,trust really is a powerful antidote to such phennomenon, which can not only break down the barriers but also make our distence closely heart to heart. In our daily lives, we should behave to trust the people around us as possible as we can . Doing like this,no matter how awful situation we faced, there must be at least a loyal friend keep stay with you all the time. On the other hand,she will spent every effort to help you to solve problem.It is evident that trust makes people live better and have an stubbon friendship. Trust help people come through the difficulties;moever, it brought huge profit. Have you trust your friends , families today? If not,please trust them from now on. It is deeply-rooted in my mind that the world will be more wonderful if we keep the smiles of trust on our faces.

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