2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

文中有几处拼写错误，应增加学术词汇的使用；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用；有效的运用了一些复杂句。

On maintaining trust As the proverb goes: if we all keep in trust with each other, our lives would be of great harmony and beauty. However, the high-pressure living of modern society makes people lose trust and indifferent. In my opinion,trust really is a powerful antidote to such phennomenon, which can not only break down the barriers but also make our closely heart to heart. In our daily lives, we should behave to trust the people around us as possible as we can . Doing like this,no matter how awful situation we faced, there must be at least a loyal friend keep stay with you all the time. On the other hand,she will spent every effort to help you to solve problem.It is evident that trust makes people live better and have an stubbon friendship. Trust help people come through the difficulties;moever, it brought huge profit. Have you trust your friends , families today? If not,please trust them from now on. It is deeply-rooted in my mind that the world will be more wonderful if we keep the smiles of trust on our faces.