题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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On maintaining trust As the proverb goes: if we all keep in trust with each other, our lives would be of great harmony and beauty. However, the high-pressure living of modern society makes people full of indifferent and the interpersonal relationship becomes more and more distant. In my opinion,trust really is a powerful antidote to this phenomenon, which can not only break down the barriers but also make our close heart and heart. Such examples might be given easily.In our daily lives, we should trust in the people around us as possible as we can. To do like this,no matter how awful situation you faced, there must be at least a loyal friend keep staying with you all the time. On the other hand,she will spend every effort helping you come through difficulties.It is evident that trust makes people live better and build a stubborn friendship. Trusting help people come through the difficulties;moreover, it brought huge profit. Have you believe in your friends, families today? If not,please rely on them from now on. It is deeply-rooted in my mind that the world will be more wonderful if we keep the smiles of trust on our faces.