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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12940
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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This graph shows us that a parents communicated with their child by computer.This parents told their thinking to their child. Nowadays,with the development of the techonology,the computer appeared in our life.As the economic improving,the computer become cheep and intelligence.So we can make good use of the internet and communicate with everyone.we can get in thouch with others easily and convient.Sometimes,we have to study,work or do anything else that make us leave for a time.We can greet or chat with our friends and parents when we feel alone or miss someone. On the other hand,this conivence way make a part of people became too lazy to appoint friends.In my opinion,we should make use of computer,but shouldn't be dependent on it.

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