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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8974
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

"It is unwise to judge a man by their appearance." It is an old chinese saying. I am very support this point. But unfortunately, nowadays many people judge a person by their appearance. It seems to become a normal and only way to judge our personal character and the status. It is undoubtedly that a good-looking can be show our charming, in the meantime, we can easy to gain appreciation from others. Even a decent look is a passport in some position, like receptionist and model. But it is not mean anything can judge by their appearance. In fact, many great men haven't a handsome outside in history. Take Stephen Hawking as a example, he got a serious illness,he even can't talk and walk. Many men were shock and afraid of his outside. Although he is so awful, he made amazing discovery on his lifetime. Now people all adore him. Maybe at the first many of us were despite him, we change our mind now. Take Deng Xiaoping as another sample, he was a great national leader in china. He was short, and nothing seemed to better than anyone in appearance. Nevertheless with his personal character and capable, he made himself as a great person in chinese. To summarise, we should pay attention to insight not outside.

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