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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；熟练使用了一些长难句；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Recently the issue of the phenomenon of spending too much time in playing the cellphone has been brought into focus. It is really common that you would see people great in number on the street only taking eyes on their phone. In my opinion, it is a way on wasting the most important time of your life. It must be the most long distance in this world that you just sit beside me and your heart is far away from me, but on that cold machine. You shouldn't waste such an wonderful time but should use it in the other meaningful thing.Such as taking a foot steps to find you litttle dream, telling someone you have liked for several years, and taking up a book dreaming to read for a long time. All in all, you should stay away from you cellphone, and focus on you life which should be choked with different people or things.
