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I went to the zoo last weekend.But I saw some thing is not polite.There are lots of visitor .They fed the monkey and played with tiger.Animal is friendly with us,we must be kind to animal.It's important to protect the nature.Don't drop litter in the zoo,because protect the animal just protect us.