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I went to the zoo last weekend.But I saw something is very rude.There are lots of visitors in it.They fed the monkey and played with tiger.Animal is friendly with us,we must be kind to animal.It's important to protect the nature.Don't drop litter in the zoo,because protect the animal even protect ourselves.